Rejoicing in your feel,
The best of being with you,
As we lay down on our backs,
And ruminate on what’s to come.
The convivial warmth;
Audibly ringing in your voice,
As your lips touch mine,
In this corporeal world of chimera!
My sensus communis screaming aloud;
Contradicting the intense passion searing within,
Cupid’s arrow was all but shot,
Making it however incapable to rescind.
In this phantasmal world all lost,
As we traverse into this desirous voyage,
Losing ourselves in this ‘eternal desire’,
Affecting us with sizeable warmth.
The light in your eyes reflecting mine,
Sustains me from this soul bearing resilience,
Unleashes me from the cosset I was swathed in,
While I writhe at the touch of your skin on mine;
I discover stalwart pride shining forth in those liquid brown eyes,
As they wordlessly say “now we’re one”.
Copyright(c) 2007 Shivnita
4 comments:
So far The Best.
A delight mam.
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Thanks a lot.. glad u liked it!
Hi !
Thank u for all ur genuine and inspiring comments; comments that are not exceedingly flattering, but very constructive and help-worthy. Thank u mate.
Fabulous weaving!Only thing i missed is little rhyming that could be done... although it's under sole discretion of the poet, still thought to voice :)
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